Celpip Writing an Email Sample 298

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

• Give a description of the incident
• Complain about the short fencing
• Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Dear Manager,

I am here to express my concern about the incident that happened in side your zoological park on last Sunday.

I’m visited you park along with my family and friends to enjoy the weekend picnic. We where a group of 10 people including 3 children. The incident was happened in that fine morning after we visited elephant show guide take us to the next area of the park to show feeding of tiger and lions.

We where very excited to see the event but the experience was shocking there was only 10 mints left to start the show. A man from the left side top corner cage fell down in to the middle of 3 tigers and he got attacked.

There where two reason that I want to bring in to your attention. First one is the show was over crowded with more than the capacity of that palace. The major reason is fencing used around the cage where very short and this cost a man life. There should be effective fencing and control in numbers of visitors especial when conducting these kind of events. Its a real threat to the visitors life.

with
Regards
Aneesh