Reporting a Tragic Incident at the Zoo

Task: Reporting a Safety Incident at the Zoological Park

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Response: I am writing to express my deep concern regarding an unfortunate incident I witnessed during my recent visit to the City Zoological Park on October 12th.

While I was near the tiger enclosure, a man accidentally fell inside and tragically lost his life. The entire situation was horrifying, and although the staff tried to control the crowd, there seemed to be a delay in the emergency response.

This incident has left me deeply disturbed, and I feel that stricter safety measures should be implemented to prevent such tragedies in the future. I strongly suggest increasing the height of the protective barriers, placing clear warning signs, and ensuring that security personnel are present at all major enclosures at all times.

It would also be helpful to have emergency medical staff available within the park premises. I hope you will take this matter seriously and take immediate action to enhance visitor safety. Thank you for your attention and understanding.

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